Final Edited Treatment
in the first analysis of our treatment we made a few spelling mistakes and some of the content was a bit hard to understand. as well as this the name "suburban legend" did not satisfy peers so in our final treatment we decided to change it and used a line from a famous child nursery rhyme teddy bears picnic. we decided to use this as it creates a intensity that is developed by the refference to children as well as this it associates with a forest and our film is set in a forest. we also made amendments to the spelling mistakes and weird order of context that previously confused peers. it is important to use peer feedback as in the group we are all doing thrillers so we have similar understanding to the conventions of a thriller etc. this being so our peers are able to highlight areas that dont make sense and give constructive criticism that would eventually help in the final filming process.
