plot proposal analysis

 As shown, the ideas that we wished to explore were seen as un-achievable as the content may have been too imaginative and complex for us to fit into the two minute criteria. we required feedback from our colleges and asked for ideas to which would make the idea more achievable. Their feed back was:-

• At 14:30 Sam mentions an idea in which will help towards fitting our possible idea for our film into the 2 minute requirement. by using jump cuts etc we would be able to show the action and government plot that we wanted to use and also make it so the viewer would wish to continue, unlike before hand when they already knew what had happened etc. we have discussed this information and will take it into consideration for our overall product.
•  at 16:02 josh suggests a film that we as a group could watch, which would help us with ideas and conventions to use for our idea. he suggested the film "Vantage Point", this film has been added to a selection which we as a group have viewed for help in our film.
• at 17:05 Mr Hoode gave a fair point in reference to our idea being too extreme. we seemed to have lead to "making a film we want to make, rather than a film we need to make to pass the course" this point was taken into deep consideration and from this we have abolished our initial idea and have created a new, suitable plot which would be doable and suitable to pass the course.
• at 22:00 Matt gave a good idea which helped fit our main convention into a suitable, and less complex film idea which involved the mentally ill man in a shrinks office and showing flashbacks of his past. This was discussed and we did consider using this, had we not abolished the main convention due to its complexity.